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Comment on The Window by No Funny, just “The Window” « Mouse’s Lilypad

No Funny, just “The Window” « Mouse’s Lilypad — Fri, 22 May 2009 14:12:45 +0000

[...] I revised “The Window,” and have decided to share it with you. This is what I turned in for my final grade in creative writing. There’s not a lot of changes, but hopefully the changes make the story better. You can read the original story by clicking here. [...]

Comment on Friday Muppet Chickens Funny by Laurie

Laurie — Sat, 16 May 2009 19:17:33 +0000

Boy, what timing you have. Millie just started making the chicken sound over the last couple days and loves listening to people make the sounds. So, this gave me a break. She loves it!

Comment on The Window by Weary Bflat Hag

Weary Bflat Hag — Tue, 21 Apr 2009 11:58:55 +0000

Jill … I loved this story. Great job putting across the personality of the character in very short order. In other words… I knew her. I knew someone just like her. And I also knew someone just like her sister! And I knew that kind of angst she was feeling over the desire to BE something and the walls (sister, mother, discouragement) that stood in the way.
OUTSTANDING job at putting all that out here so concisely. Me? Would have taken me about 32k of type to get that across and it still wouldn’t have been as good.

Comment on Learning disability? by Mary McConnell

Mary McConnell — Fri, 17 Apr 2009 15:49:39 +0000

Hi Jill !!
Last year I read a great book on Asperger’s….”Asperger’s Syndrome A guide for Parents and Professionals”. Barnes and Noble had several interesting books on A. Syndrome. I have relatives who are bi-polar and as long as they stay on their meds, they do great.
Know your family is always here for you !!!

Comment on The Window by Mary McConnell

Mary McConnell — Fri, 17 Apr 2009 15:42:57 +0000

Enjoyed this story interesting twist in the end, I wasn’t expecting, however that’s what makes it great!
Keep up your writing Jill !!! For those of us clueless to writing you are an inspiration.
take great care !

Comment on Getting by by Mary McConnell

Mary McConnell — Fri, 17 Apr 2009 15:38:34 +0000

hey Jill, when i get blood drawn which has been alot over the past few years, now have to have it done in my hand. I never watch !!! And I usually count backwards from 100!! I definately relate to the whoozy feelings, whew! Funny tho how we find ways to handle all we need to.
take care…love ya, Aunt Mary

Comment on Birthday and new digs by Laurie

Laurie — Sat, 10 Jan 2009 14:51:17 +0000

Happy belated birthday!! Ahh, the twenties were good times. The forties are approaching quickly.

Comment on It’s official!!!! by Laurie

Laurie — Fri, 28 Nov 2008 15:42:26 +0000

Congratulations!! I read this the day after Thanksgiving … otherwise I would have said something on Thursday, when I saw you!

Comment on NaNo Blues by Laurie

Laurie — Wed, 19 Nov 2008 01:39:18 +0000

Good luck! Give it your best shot!

Comment on Announcing my candidacy…. by WonderGoon

WonderGoon — Tue, 04 Nov 2008 05:01:22 +0000

Likewise, I found your blog through the related links on my own. Good luck in NaNoWriMo08.

Goon